Thread:ClammierASP317/@comment-5632187-20141019001605

Hey there, Claimer, I was just checking out some of your work on the Wiki and I noticed that you added a rather long strategy to the Capra Demon page. The fact that you're getting into editing is great, but I'd just like to give you a few guidelines to follow.

First, we don't use second person perspective on this Wiki, so instead of saying "you went through" it should say "the player went through". Also listing extremely specific things isn't best, not only because not all players will have found a way to obtain them, but also because it makes it sound like only that gear is viable for the boss. Instead of specifying Havel's Set, just say "An armor set with high physical defense".

Also try to avoid making posts wordy, try to keep it short and concise. You posted a very long, hard to sift through strategy guide when all it really needs is a few sentences that get straight to the point. I'm gonna fix up your edit on the page so you can see what I'm talking about.

Please don't let this discourage you from editing, all help is appreciated. Keep up the great work, and hope to see you around!

-Cosmic 