Thread:Aftenshnoshnikr/@comment-6003396-20130704072358

Hi. Thanks for all of your edits so far. Just thought I would provide some feedback.

When it comes to strategies, this wiki's policy is to avoid too much of the "walkthrough" style and provide more objective statements. And to try to avoid telling the player what to do. For example, that they "should" do this or not do that etc. This falls in line with the Manual of Style's note on ""Recommended", "Advised", and other authoritative statements". As Dark Souls has many different ways to approach a situation, as well as many different playstyles, one can hardly say that any given person should do one thing over something else. (There are some obvious things one should not do, of course. Just speaking in generalities here.)

A more specific example: "The Giant Rat hits hard, players or hosts of summons should be extremely careful of damage at this stage because of how close the boss fight is in vicinity to the Giant Rat." It would be possible to relate that the arena is relatively small, and that the Giant Rat can potentially cause a lot of damage, without telling them to be extremely careful (as this should be clear). In essence, try to keep things general, without being too obvious. I don't know if that helps. It is difficult to describe exactly what to do, nor do I think that it is my place to do so. Just relating what I have learned about this wiki's style.

One more note, activating "Source Mode" while editing an article will enable the spell check feature. To do this, there should be two tabs on the upper right, above the article's content. One will be "Source Mode" and the other "Visual Mode"

If you have any questions, feel free to ask me or any of the admins/active members. Thanks. 