Thread:Gatiha/@comment-6003396-20140314105046

Hi, thanks for your recent edits. Please read the Manual of Style if you haven't already. One of the more common mistakes is to use second person pronouns in articles (you, your, etc.). Instead, use "the player" and the like. Also, regarding strategies, try to avoid walkthrough, hold-your-hand type stuff. Instead, try to limit it to more universal and concise strategies, as there is almost always more than one way to approach any situation in Dark Souls I & II. If we were to include in-depth strategies for every character build, the article would quickly become very lengthy. Feel free to take a look at some of the already existing boss pages to get an idea of the strategy sections, or to ask any questions. Thanks. 