Thread:Cement Plant/@comment-1687225-20121029151921

Very useful information and good syntax. Just be careful to include a space between words and parentheses. For example, "I ate an apple (but I am still hungry)" is correct while "I ate an apple(but I am still hungry) is not. Also, try to avoid using "note the", "do note that", "notable" etc; they never add anything meaningful to a sentence. Finally, try to keep a neutral tone throughout editing and avoid words like "unfortunately" and "popular". 