Thread:Mrbenben/@comment-5632187-20141221191639

Hey Mrbenben! Thanks for your work on the Illusory Wall (Dark Souls II) page, it was a great start for the page! Just something I noticed, please try to to avoid using second person perspective (you, you're, etc.) on any articles, instead use third person (the player, Bearer of the Curse, he, she, etc.). Also, just try to double check your grammar. Other than that, keep up the great work! We look forward to having you on the Wiki. If you have any questions, don't hesitate to ask me or any other Administrator, or you can take it to the Forums if you'd like. 